Apr 13, 2010

Two Stoned Poems



Stones Circle


Like nomads at the vernal equinox
my stones grow restive.  I'll double-lock
their shed!  I've a life's work there,
catalogued and safely stabled.
But you can't squeeze gratitude from stone
when the thrust of bud and time
unlocks their wanderlust.
There's my footloose granite, anxious to be gone;
quartz nursing itchy feet;
irascible old pumice, rotten
with travel bug. Batch of globe trotters!
They'd cluster, cheek by jowl
on common beaches. So while they plot
I'll crouch at the keyhole, alert
to the changing tempo of their rumbles.
At all costs I'll fence that huge momentum.
Feckless collection!  I've offered them a roost,
an end to voyaging.  And yet, like madmen
furious in asylums whirl, they roll
and roll and spurn their meals of moss.




Doubts in Limestone Country


The compass memory hesitates between
a sense of longing and of not belonging
in other shires. Stone walls?  Stone sheep enscribed
in strata mapped like ribs of half-ploughed bone
beneath the torn edge of an autumn sky?
Or chalklands perfect as the shoulders
of girls asleep through afternoons
of slanting rain, all their misgivings blurred
in the first unfocussed signatures of love?
Bone, shoulder, reassemble.  Choose.
The needle locks.  The traveller no more
can set his charts of time or place, or force
a pathway through his self-,deceit,
wanders and doubts his craft.
Rib or shoulder?  Shoulder or bone break?
Doubts like a lodestone with its instinct snapped.
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9 comments:

  1. I've been here, but have to come back and read them again a few more times before I can comment. I really don't want to just say something brainless.

    Poetry intimidates me, to be honest. I get the feeling that if I don't 'get it' then I'm lacking in something. Insight, intellect, education. Some higher brain function.

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  2. O.K, Deborah. First . . . spot the spoof! One of these I sent to a Lit.Mag editor confidently expecting an instant "NoNo!" No such luck! It was accepted, and likely earned me £2. I don't know what this proves except "Poetry is what you can get away with."

    The other probably proves only that I was at the time a fawning little lick-spittle acolyte of Lawrence Durrell.

    Now . . . which is which?

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  3. So it's Stones Circle for me, every time - I collect rocks and crystals...and my lodestone instinct remains strong, despite my having none of the higher brain function that Deb is looking for...

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  4. All righty, here I am. At the front of the class and sitting up straight.

    *takes a deep breath* (with thanks to brokenbiro for the asterisk idea)

    I think the first one is the silly one, Sir.
    Am I right? *wincing*

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  5. Deborah. Top Lass! The first one is the one I submitted as a "try on"
    Don't know what one learns from this. Sounding cryptic is a sure road to success? You can fool some of the editors some of the time? Bet the spoofed editor would reply along the lines . "This guy doesn't know how good his poem is!" - meaning, "It takes a smart editor like me . . . " etc
    Some people collect stamps, china cats . . why not stones?

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  6. Basically everything I learned about life came from two sources: Math(s) class and the reading of 'The Emperor's New Clothes'.

    The first explains everything, and the second teaches you to question everything that's been explained.

    (I think the reception of your top poem falls into the 'Emperor' category)

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  7. Hi Richard.
    A site I use a lot is called Mudcat.
    A sort of forum for seeking lyrics.
    It came up with this.
    "Trying to find the lyrics for a song from the 1920's / 30's which had the following words, We're on the road to anywhere, With never a heartache and never a care, Got no home got no cares, I'm thankful for everything the good Lord sends.
    I did once come across someone who had the sheet music but they wouldn't part with it and they've now lost it!"
    They got a reply in 2008. To save copying it all out, you should find all the words to the song here. The web page is :-

    http://www.mudcat.org/thread.cfm?threadid=75544&desc=yes

    Best I can do.
    Cheers....Bernard

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  8. Hi Doc, Re: your enquiry about driving the Poetry Bus.

    The Poetry Bus drivers volunteer their services to TFE via a comment on any of his posts. He then allocates a week for you to drive the bus. At some point during the week before, the driver posts his/her challenge to give passengers time to come up with something. They will then leave comments on the challenge post when their post is 'up', and the driver, on the Monday, posts his poem with links to all the passengers - which can be updated if new passengers turn up late (which is often the case).

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WV's turned off. Glad to see this is catching on. I don't want my readers to work for nothing for folk whose OCR software doesn't work properly.