Nov 10, 2010

Microfiction Monday. November 8th.

Stony River's picture prompt is this charming study of childhood.










Haiku

Kicking through autumn's
fallen gold, my child sees where
a silver coin peeps

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9 comments:

  1. septembermomNovember 10, 2010 at 6:54 PM

    Very nice. I love the image of fallen gold.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 10, 2010 at 10:31 PM

    I love the image of 'fallen gold' too...very nice Haiku--fits the picture perfectly.
    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  3. SuzNovember 11, 2010 at 4:18 PM

    This was a delightful poem
    ...ah brevity...power

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  4. Myrna R.November 11, 2010 at 4:27 PM

    Lovely haiku. You evoked such feelings with so few words. Very nice.

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  5. JinksyNovember 12, 2010 at 7:55 AM

    A mercenary Haiku, egad! But gold leaf wins on value...

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  6. AnonymousNovember 16, 2010 at 2:51 PM

    kicking autumn leaves,
    what a naughty and cute line.
    stunning Haiku.

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  7. CadNovember 18, 2010 at 8:27 PM

    As a gardener, I can't help but look at all those leaves with a certain degree of trepidation - they remind me of how many I still need to sweep up off my lawn!

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  8. Arian TejanoNovember 19, 2010 at 1:43 AM

    tender and brittle :)

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  9. Dawn@Lighten Up!November 23, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    Love the haiku. Simple. Elegant.

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WV's turned off. Glad to see this is catching on. I don't want my readers to work for nothing for folk whose OCR software doesn't work properly.

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