Feb 23, 2011

Magpie Tales#54

In the week when a 6.3 Richter Scale earthquake struck South Island, New Zealand, Willow offers poets and writers this picture prompt. 



 Random

You ever see a big man really cry?
Even a man you’d think had seen it all?
Big Benny, captain of a Rescue Squad
that shifted slabs of brickwork, dug toward
the tap-tap-taps, the cries for help, the child.
What did they find, crushed in the bloody tomb
the shaking earth had fashioned? Benny said
“We were too late. Maybe five she’d be. Or six.
Her Ma had tried to shield her. She’d gone, too.”
He looked up, helpless, held out helpless hands.
“Their whole house had come down. The ceiling joists
had pinned them. Smashed them. But next door – next door
hardly a tile shook loose. Her puzzle neither.”
“Puzzle, Benny?”
                            “They’d made the kid’s jig-saw.
One with big lunky pieces for young kids.
She’d laid it on the floor, finished, all but for
the last piece she still held in her wee hand,
her wee mouth shaping ‘There’ – how,
I ask you, how could the house come down
and not shake out one piece, not one, yet kill.”

His hard-hat laid aside, his head laid down
onto his arms. His shoulders shook. Someone
said “He’s got kids too. Get the lad some tea.”

Outside. a thin rain falls damping the dust.
Folk jabber on cellphones, their day in chaos,
or sit, stare, ask how can they help, mothers,
old men, firecrews, paramedics, schoolboys,
those running they know not where to flee their fear,
even the petty thieves, pushers and crooks
today in these torn streets are worth his tears 


19 comments:

  1. my heart goes out to all who suffered in NZ. These terrible moments are unfortunately the common bonds that bring us together.

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  2. That's what you get for being "eye-witness to tectonic plate movements." The earth is big enough to move us all.

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  3. Apropos poem to what has happened at Christchurch. I've never felt a quake but my mother-in-law has and it shooked her so that it left trauma for a few years after that. And what makes it so tragic is that afterwards we see how many homes and lives have vanished as a result.

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  4. Heartbreaking. Well chosen words and imagery.

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  5. You paint a picture, grim though it is, with grace and style.

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  6. This was a very moving piece. I felt like I was actually in the room listening to the person speak. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for visiting my blog as well.

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  7. A moving tribute Doc.

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  8. The word moving also came to my mind (no pun intended) and your closing line is outstanding.

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  9. The miracle is, not more people lost their lives..

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  10. oh this is too sad
    and it's happening now
    why? the eternal question

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  11. I had tears in my eyes too - it's just inexplicable and sad...

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  12. Beautifully handled for such a difficult situation. My heart breaks for people who are forced to endure natural disasters, the dearly departed and those they leave behind.

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  13. Very vivid indeed. You captured the scene and emotion well here. A sad write

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  14. welcome sharing your poetry with us,
    first time participants can share 1 to 3 old poems or poems unrelated to our theme.

    Happy Monday.

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  15. A scene played out many times over the centuries. Very tender and moving piece.

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WV's turned off. Glad to see this is catching on. I don't want my readers to work for nothing for folk whose OCR software doesn't work properly.