Mar 19, 2010

Posted for the Theme Thursday prompt - MAP


MAPS


Years later, maybe, you'll come upon old maps
boxed with your youth and dusted with misgivings.
And perhaps  they'd crackle if unfolded, 
as the first frosts hard on the heels of autumn crisp the leaves.
Beware! They lure like carillons wrenching you
back over moorlands where the curlew grieves.


Leave maps as metaphors you tramped among . .
A boot-cap scuffles and chunks of rock dislodged
whirr down to silence, falling far too long . .
memorials of hushed October glens
where voices drift miles and the ice-axe chink
lies like a bell note on the misting air.


Sip your memories in the firelight, but . .
let your maps be, or your finger
tracing paths once taken, could lead you
to years that rise like runs of scree,
and browsing through your autumn days, unfold
times creased with use and truths that dropped apart.
For those far, remembered hills could clasp love-close
dried blades of grass that pierce you to the heart.

8 comments:

  1. Best leave such maps well folded, and draw yourself a new one, with paths less frought with sadness. I'm having to wipe away a tear...
    Suggest you listen to Edith Piaff and learn a lesson from her - have no regrets, rather remember the best times as jewels that studded your path.

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  2. Good to see you back in creative mode,Doc. I was beginning to wonder where you were.

    Sometimes I think it is a good idea to review maps, especially when one is in danger of following the same route again.

    Lovely, evocative images.

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  3. Whohoo!This is great stuff! Glad you popped up in the soup!

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  4. Thank you, Jinksy, Denise and Von. All the poems here have appeared in small Lit.Mags at one time or another, and wheyhey! PAID FOR. My lifetime earnings from poems must be nearing 50 quid!

    Many thnks to eagoodlife for joining the Happy Band of Followers.

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  5. A lovely, gently melancholic poem, Dr. Several phrases are particularly evocative...'the ice-axe chink lies like a bell note on the misting air' and 'sip your memories in the firelight'. Have you read much of John Updike? This reminds me of the way he used words so uniquely.

    It's beautiful really. I've just read it for the third time and it speaks to me. I could write an essay about it.

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  6. I read the first of John Updike's "Rabbit" sequence. I think you were alluding to "Rabbit Redux" in your Fridge Soup post titled "Rabbit Reduced" ??

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  7. I was. You're the only one who appeared to get it.

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  8. 50 QUID EH! I'm always drawn to men with money.

    Sorry, I know this is your serious stuff so no more jokes here.

    I find it very heartening that you have regrets .It signifies an authentic life, courage and a lack of complacency that afflicts popular thought and song titles..'

    ' No Regrets'
    is a bit like Ms Streisand's misconception about
    ' People who need people, are the luckiest people, in the Wooorld '

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WV's turned off. Glad to see this is catching on. I don't want my readers to work for nothing for folk whose OCR software doesn't work properly.