That Thing passed through my
window
as if no glass were there,
my window just like air. And
now
the Thing is out there,
waiting –
Child, we say ‘by’ not
‘through’.
a window. What thing?
I seemed to hear it shriek -
and look at its gloomy cowl.
I cannot see which way it
faces -
the stars, or scowling in at
me.
Oh, don’t remove your cowl,
Oh, don’t remove your cowl,
you Thing, so still and
silent.
I will be good if you don’t
lift your cowl.
You Silly! Are you
fevered?
It was you who shrieked.
You had
a silly dream. And what’s
this cowl?
Let me feel your brow . .
Don’t . . don’t let it touch
me! Don’t
let the Thing come in.
Enough .Go back to sleep. Why do you stare
so at the window? There’s
nothing there.
Only the trees and
stars. It stood
by my bed where you are. It’s awful hand
appeared from under its white cloak.
Its fingers were all bone.
They pointed,
pointed their bones at me.
And then it shrieked.
Bone fingers! Tut! What
nonsense!
Now, lie down again. You
are quite
shaking. I wish
I had curtains
so it could not see. Do you think
Things like that can pass
through curtains?
Really, Child! Goodnight!
Oh please, please - don’t put out the
light!
Please, don’t put out the
light.

Hah! I dig it.
ReplyDeleteLovecraft by way of Silverstein!
If you say it's out there, I believe it!! Cowl, or no..you've got that magic touch!!
ReplyDeleteNight frights. Monsters under the bed. And, in the closet. Boney death's beckoning finger. It's a dangerous road - growing up.
ReplyDeleteA frightening parting line.
ReplyDeleteSpooky. It reminds me of my little nephew that told his dad, "there are scary monsters out there!" in his sweet, sincere four year old voice.
ReplyDeleteoooh scary piece! Good scary Magpie!
ReplyDeleteI believe you. It was there. Not a doubt.
ReplyDeleteSounds as if you've stayed the night at Willow Manor! Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteThe bony fingers would have had me pertrified, without anything else! But I'm not sure whether a light bulb would have been enough to make me feel brave - might have taken a few cuddles from a non-boney fingered human to make me feel secure. Literally, a haunting Magpie.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece, lovely rhythm to it, there are a lot of bony fingers around this weeks magpies.
ReplyDeleteI think there's a subtext. Doctor FTSE, did you intend readers to understand that the child had a nightmare parent as well as a bad dream? Fancy "tut-tutting" a Little One who is shaking with fear, then switching off the light.
ReplyDeleteWonderful magpie! Excellently crafted magpie! =)
ReplyDelete-Weasel
i can relate to this one....great magpie! :-)
ReplyDeleteshivers...the things we see in the night...even scarier when others can not see them...very nice mag!
ReplyDeleteOh dear, I remember having nights like this as a child. A great take on the Magpie.
ReplyDeleteThank you one and all for these kind and encouraging comments.
ReplyDeleteMrs.Trellis . . your comment will be directed to my eMail and I will reply to the point of interpretation that you raise here by eMail. I can say that in early drafts of the poem, the parent appeared to be much kinder to the child in it's plight.
Excellent! I remember being sick as a child, and the bear that was walking on a cobweb strand connecting my bed to a chair--and something terrible was going to happen if the cobweb broke. You did a great job of capturing childhood terror.
ReplyDeletethis was a lot of fun. I read it out loud.
ReplyDeleteit's funny were your imagination takes you.
Rene
Oooo nice and scary...boney fingers and all ... good one for halloween....bkm
ReplyDeletePoignant!
ReplyDeleteVivid conversation!
ReplyDeleteOh, this was great!!!!
ReplyDeleteIf any commenters look in again . . .
ReplyDeleteI've read quite a lot of the Magpie entries from this picture prompt. I now see that the photo is taken from OUTSIDE the room. The figure is INSIDE the room and the trees are REFLECTED in the window glass.
Well . . well . . well . . and there was me thinking it was taken from INSIDE the room and the figure was OUTSIDE and because the trees are visible THROUGH the figure, the figure must be a GHOST of a dream image. Hmmm . . . must try harder!