Aug 5, 2010

Just for interest, I have reworked an earlier poem as an ETHEREE

Pearls

 I
found them
one by one.
Cut glass. A chime
of bells. Mists shuffling
in  the sun. Old wood with
scent of lavender. Laughter
where children run. I hoarded them,
unmatched, unlit. And in time you came
to be the thread, the thread to string them on.



7 comments:

  1. A pearl necklace like this is priceless, and the best kind to have. A beautiful etheree, for the form fits the subject exactly, each line a pearl on your thread.

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  2. Oh this is no ordinary etheree. This isn't just a casual and unthinking putting-together of syllables. This is absolutely lovely - a true poem. I think it's beautiful, really I do.

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  3. Oh, my lovely friends . . . what can I say? You're so kind I'm almost fillin' up!
    (Go to it, Jinks . . . double etheree about the Doc fillin' up. "Fillin' up what?", I hear you cry. HaHa! Go HERE and read through the comments carefully . . . )

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  6. Doc
    may fill
    his wee boots
    - or even can -
    (with WHAT, I wot not!)
    But be sure he's the man,
    if anyone can be, to
    fertilise ripe ground or maybe
    even vegetables, with ideas
    which produce a most bounteous harvest.

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  7. "the thread to string them on" Oh, that is just delicious....

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WV's turned off. Glad to see this is catching on. I don't want my readers to work for nothing for folk whose OCR software doesn't work properly.