Thanks once more to Willow for a prompt to reflect upon.
Last Night
This is where they lead, the
wordless bargains
struck for this brief respite
from despair.
Muttered endearments, dear to
neither, fall
between these bought, uncaring lips and mine
onto these rented pillows. But ever,
with the act that’s no more than acting done
and the bedside clock sheds desolation
drop by drop, another’s breath is heard
in the sleepless dark. Yes, all unbidden
another whispers of an older passion
never mirrored in its simulacrum,
however red the mouth, however sweet
the practised kisses, however loving
seem the unloving arms. Then these tossed sheets
cannot spread wide enough to dry my tears.
cannot spread wide enough to dry my tears.

Beautiful!Loved the way you have ended the poem.
ReplyDeleteyou call it love, but it's really not at all..it's just business
ReplyDeletewonderful magpie...very powerful
Loved the masterful use of language here, especially in "bedside clock sheds desolation drop by drop," and I'm looking up "simulacrum" next. I love reading poetry like this that teaches me something new with each reading.
ReplyDeleteMasterful piece of business played out in desolation.
ReplyDeleteSad way of picturing a professional relationship...very intense!
ReplyDeleteps - regarding my magpie (CastaZero): the end of the tale is not a poem, is just the final lyrics of a famous song from the 70's -Hotel California - that I thought was a good reference for the story. Thanks a lot for your comment!
"never mirrored in its simulacrum"
ReplyDeleteI love this line!
mirror at crossroads
very powerful Great Magpie
ReplyDeleteAnd yet we are all people...past wanting the "real thing"? You write with great truth, saddness...
ReplyDelete'Muttered endearments, dear to neither, fall
ReplyDeletebetween these bought, uncaring lips and mine
onto these rented pillows.'
and ...
'and the bedside clock sheds desolation
drop by drop, another’s breath is heard
in the sleepless dark.'
What absolutely wonderful writing, so subtle and skilfull and full of story. I loved it.
My Magpie
holy moly you're good at this game
ReplyDeletewonderful...now to go to the dictionary,Doc
A brief respite from despair on rented pillows
ReplyDeleteseems hardly worth it.This sentiment is well
expressed in your poem, Footsie.
a deftly worded comment on love bought...
ReplyDeletesheets can not spread wide enough to dry tears,
ReplyDeleteso powerful line here,
beautiful crafted tale.
oh i love that last line...very nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the Mag. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteagree the last line is a winner....reveals the magnitude of the sorrow....bkm
ReplyDeleteA brilliant way of capturing such overwhelming sorrow, as with your choice of words in the closing line of your poem. Just brilliant... I loved it!
ReplyDeletethis is killer, love the opening line,
ReplyDelete'This is where they lead, the wordless bargains...' drew me right in, the whole thing carrying me through. Def. like this style of yours.
Stellar piece of writing here. Damn, this one's good!
ReplyDeleteEveryone else is right -- great piece of writing. Heartbreaking in all the right ways, and with a nice hard underlying edge.
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